Ghyll talk:Carsokian

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Right. Have at it then. Hack it apart. There must be plenty of inconsistancies. I'm not quite happy with this entry, but I felt that someone had to dib it and no one else seemed eager, so I did. Mainly, to keep the game flowing. That'll teach me! I'll add the dates to the timeline after all the edits are done. --Doctor Phineas Crank 22:58, 22 Sep 2004 (EDT)

No worries about the timeline - when I go through my copyediting phase, I always update all the other stuff in tune with it. A very quick readthrough (pizza in the oven, no time to factcheck) makes me pause on the Gabson Foye mention: wasn't his future wife hinted at a relation with Bethany, as opposed to him? Or is it just his mother who heard wrong? My memory just may be wrong. --Morbus Iff 23:18, 22 Sep 2004 (EDT)

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