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Morbus, this is absolutely riddled with malapropisms, to say nothing of the big fat dangling modifier in graf 6. But I don't know whether to copy-edit these out, or whether they are part of the general effect of mild incoherence suggesting that the author is in the early stages of, umm, succumbal. Please advise. --[[User:Jcowan|Jcowan]] 12:33, 29 Sep 2004 (EDT) | Morbus, this is absolutely riddled with malapropisms, to say nothing of the big fat dangling modifier in graf 6. But I don't know whether to copy-edit these out, or whether they are part of the general effect of mild incoherence suggesting that the author is in the early stages of, umm, succumbal. Please advise. --[[User:Jcowan|Jcowan]] 12:33, 29 Sep 2004 (EDT) | ||
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| + | Unintentional, and not obvious enough to suggest intended affliction (though it's a good idea, I have no desire to keep it for the duration of Ghyll). Copyedit as necessary, and I'll revert anything I prefer stylisitically. --[[User:Morbus Iff|Morbus Iff]] 12:46, 29 Sep 2004 (EDT) | ||
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Oh, well done! Much better than I'd hoped for when I made the phantom. Actually, what I'd been picturing was Father Jack from the BBC show "Father Ted". He has rather nasty version of Tourette's Syndrome that involves a mere two, or three, topics, depending on how you classify two of them. If you're not familiar with it, the show is well worth finding. --Doctor Phineas Crank 10:06, 29 Sep 2004 (EDT)
Actually, no, I've not seen it - I'll throw it on my list of things to investigate. If I had more time, I really wanted to create some advertising jingles for the infected to have belted out, but perhaps in another entry on another turn. --Morbus Iff 11:40, 29 Sep 2004 (EDT)
Morbus, this is absolutely riddled with malapropisms, to say nothing of the big fat dangling modifier in graf 6. But I don't know whether to copy-edit these out, or whether they are part of the general effect of mild incoherence suggesting that the author is in the early stages of, umm, succumbal. Please advise. --Jcowan 12:33, 29 Sep 2004 (EDT)
Unintentional, and not obvious enough to suggest intended affliction (though it's a good idea, I have no desire to keep it for the duration of Ghyll). Copyedit as necessary, and I'll revert anything I prefer stylisitically. --Morbus Iff 12:46, 29 Sep 2004 (EDT)
