Difference between revisions of "Ghyll talk:DermPachyges"

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* No signature!! (''Look who's talking, Jcowan! --[[User:Morbus Iff|Morbus Iff]] 23:22, 6 Oct 2004 (EDT)'').
 
* If pachyderms steer by the stars, how can departures be in the late morning and afternoon?
 
* If pachyderms steer by the stars, how can departures be in the late morning and afternoon?
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--[[User:Jcowan|Jcowan]] 09:28, 30 Sep 2004 (EDT)

Revision as of 22:22, 6 October 2004

Copy editor's notes: In addition to the usual changes, I made some rather whimsical additions to the text, just because I couldn't resist them. Feel free to revert any or all of these that you don't like:

  • PrettyDermPhunny, the informal newsletter
  • Elifonts or Olephents (cf. Tolkien's Oliphaunt, Dutch olifant, Old German olbenta 'camel' (!))
  • etymology of the term "pachyderm"
  • many towns have DermPachyges links

Points you need to fix:

  • No signature!! (Look who's talking, Jcowan! --Morbus Iff 23:22, 6 Oct 2004 (EDT)).
  • If pachyderms steer by the stars, how can departures be in the late morning and afternoon?

--Jcowan 09:28, 30 Sep 2004 (EDT)